What is a poet.

On a shelf at about eye level to my desk I have a paperback of Michael Schmidt’s
Lives of the Poets (Phoenix, 1998) a one-volume history of poetry in English.
Over the course of a thousand plus pages, the reader travels from Piers Plowman to post-modernists via the work of over 250 poets. Showing how politics, history and accidents combine to create the poetic imagination over the centuries, this book is an incredible achievement. I’m not sure if I’ve ever read through it chronologically, but I do return from time to time to browse and learn. If you don’t know this book I can recommend it, and am particularly impressed by its lack of jargon and clearly expressed, if sometimes contentious opinions.

This evening the spine caught my eye and I found myself writing out the draft below. I’ve cut it down from about fifty lines. I like it alright now, but may not tomorrow.

Lives of the Poets

Who fondles bones,
who sees the ripple before he throws the stone,
who laid petals on your eyelids while you slept,
who steps unharmed from the avalanches fist,
who is trapped in the amber of a paperweight life,
who dived to find Excalibur but rescued a child,
who writes with blood in the dust of a cell,
who muffles the drum, amplifies the heart,
who draws out the thorn and holds it to the light,
who glimpsed a deer, hunted in the mist,
who listens for the signal of an intermittent god,
who translates the pulse, makes music of words,
who is a butterfly resting on a wheel,
who levels their eyes at kings and queens,
who invites the firing squad and lines up his dreams.

The remarkable Andrew Greig

I had forgotten, until tonight, that on my bookshelf was ‘A Flame In Your Heart’ by Kathleen Jamie and Andrew Greig. Published in 1986  by Bloodaxe, it is a moving collaboration in which Jamie and Greig take on the voices of a young couple in 1940, a girl and her spitfire pilot.  The book manages to be both intense and languid, delicate and muscular, the two voices blending and weaving perfectly to tell a tale of love in war.

Most people interested in contemporary poetry will know of Kathleen Jamie, but I was ignorant, until now,  of the career of the remarkable  Andrew Grieg. Thankfully, with online access to poetry resources like writers and publishers websites it’s never too late to catch up.   Grieg has won many awards for his novels, poems and music
and his website is here .

I have just been reading some of his Greig’s poems, one of which I’ve typed out below. Grieg has often written about climbing. I used to do a bit of climbing (if you count one failed attempt at Mont Blanc and a few outcrops and ridges in the UK and France) and am always drawn to poems about this subject.  The story of how Greig came to be a climber is remarkable.
Greig was writing about climbing before he ever climbed. Mountaineer Mal Duff read some poems and took Greig’s metaphors literally. Duff invited Greig on a real expedition to the Himalaya and over the years the poet climbed higher and higher.
I find this poem musical, risky and true.

Interlude
on Mustagh Tower

In these high places we are melting out
of all that made us rigid; our ice-screws
hang loose on the fixed ropes to the Col.
Monday in the Himalaya, the clouds are down,
our objective is somewhere, but obscured-
let it soar without us for a day!
We lounge in thermals on the glacier,
brewing and ‘shooting the breeze’, that improbable
project of conversation among the living.
Laughter rings across the ice. Why not?
None of us will die today-that’s immortality
you can draw on in a cigarette,
harsh and sweet, the way we like it.
Steam rises from the billy, Sandy pours.
It is true high, worked for, that we pass
hand to hand between us with our brews.
Men on ice, going nowhere and laughing
at everything we cannot see but know
is there-among the cloud, on the Col,
a hand of some sort is tightening our screws.

New New Walk

Image of New Walk issue 4 - CURRENT ISSUE - POSTAGE FREE WORLDWIDE!

Issue 4 of the wonderful New Walk is available. I’m very pleased to have two poems included. New Walk have been going for a couple of years and were one of the first publications to take my work which appeared in Issue 1.  The editors Rory Waterman ( a fine poet with a collection due from Carcanet )and Nick Everett have been unstinting supportive and generous to me, and seem to be able to attract submissions from some of the best know writers in the county as well as publishing newer writers like myself.

This edition includes work by Carol Rumens, Samantha Wynne-Rhydderch (placed second in this years National Poetry Comp. and with a keenly anticipated collection on the Scott expedition out in summer from Picador), Evan Jones, Sarah Jackson (the Nottingham based poet who’s first collection will soon be out with Bloodaxe ), Clive Watkins, C.P. Cavafy (trans. Ian Parks) and many others.

There are essays by poet and reviewer David Cooke on Derek Mahon, Gerry Cambridge on Robert Frost, Peter Redgrove remembered  and lots more including the usual beautifully produced artwork which we have come to expect in this excellent publication.

Why not take out a subscription today and help support the survival of this important new magazine on the British poetry scene.

Nottingham Launch of Four Crystal Pamphlets


Photo of serious audience taken by Aly Stoneman

Having unsuccessfully tried to tame my three-day fever with paracetamol and sooth my raw throat with lozenges, I arrived coughing, clammy and slightly off-kilter in the city of Nottingham for the launch of Crystal Pamphlets at the City Gallery.

Just past and to the left of Nottingham’s famous lion statues there is a small gated alleyway which leads to the glass fronted gallery with its white walls and wooden floor. If you turn to look up and over your shoulder before entering you can see through the steel structure over the doorway to look at  the perfectly framed council building dome, a mini St. Paul’s through a millennium bridge-style metal lattice.

I met the proprietor at the door who told me that this former sex shop had been open two months and that the sound of the clock mechanism in the tower bounces and funnels up the alley walls to ricochet into the gallery doorway.

The readers were Deborah-Tyler Bennet, Andrew Graves, Mark Goodwin, Charles Lauder, Aly Stoneman,  Wayne Burrows and myself.

The event was extremely enjoyable, there being a bar, good music  and a large audience of interested listeners. Aly had planned a really good structure to the readings; Crystal Clear director Jonathan Taylor introduced the evening, explaining how the writers had been selected via a competition and speaking about the Arts Council Grant and support from Writing East Midlands.

Each Crystal Clear poet introduced their mentor who read their own work before introducing their mentee. Before each set of poems we were treated to insights into the mentoring relationships.  Introductions enabled each reader to make succinct statements about what she or he found to be the strengths of each-others work. By the end of the evening no-one present was left in any doubt that the project had succeeded in bringing about a fruitful creative cross-pollination between all parties.

After lots of chat and a glass of wine I left the gallery to the sound of ‘Hey Joe’ played by a bandana wearing busker with log grey hair. Listening cross-legged at his feet sat two girls, aged about 16; either this was a testament to the enduring appeal of rock n roll or a sobering reminder that kids of this age still have no particular place to go.

You can read more about Crystal Clear pamphlets and other projects by clinking the link in the link on the left.

Aloud

You can hear Robert Browning forgetting his own poem on a very early gramaphone recording by clinking here.

My publisher Crystal Clear kindly arranged for me to record some of my poetry in a studio. I enjoyed the hour or so, finding my way as I read and being surprised at how putting stress on a particular word or line can change the feel of a poem. Where the stress went surprised me, seeming to be dictated by my emotion as I read. One or two poems even choked me up a bit, but I was pleased that this didn’t seem to come across in my voice.

I was also aware of how important space and pace were, the silence between title and poem, stanza and stanza, line breaks, and even the space between words. I say I was aware of these; I was also aware that in order to have any mastery of technique I still have a lot to learn.

I remember my first public spoken word performance at the age of 8. My teacher was impressed with my 3 exercise book length stories (mostly plagiarized, although when asked, I denied this). She asked me to read them to the class and recorded me on a cassette tape. I also remember reading a poem about nuclear war for my godfather
Morris Cocking, a journalist and editor. He liked the poem. I never did follow-up his advice and become a teaboy at a local paper, then the tried and tested route to cub reporter and ultimately journalistic success. A road not taken.

As a teenager I sang and played a few times in pubs and folk clubs. I sang my own songs accompanied by my acoustic guitar, once with my friend Pete singing harmony. I don’t remember being nervous at all- perhaps singing and playing is easier than reading poetry, being louder and less ‘surrounded by silence’.
A friend recently sent me a CD taken from a cassette recording. I couldn’t help being pleased to hear that fresh-faced kid singing clearly and sweetly of love and loss.
Another road not travelled.

It’s nearly three years since I first read my poetry aloud. I remember waiting to go up to the mike, heart pounding and racing, stomach full of butterflies, unable to take in much of what went before me. Then, I was literally in the spotlight, this event being in a theatre, a ten foot high projection of my upper half on the screen behind me. The paper shook in my hand as dry mouthed, I delivered my poems quickly, said my thanks and returned to my seat, relived that I hadn’t fluffed my reading too badly.

As time has gone on I hope I’ve learned some tricks and composure; not to dither or fidget too much and to slow down (unless the poem requires breakneck speed).
Some readings are better than others. Once or twice I’ve found that sweet spot where nerves are gone. You can feel the intense focus of the room, breathing life into words without getting in the way of them. This doesn’t always happen, but when it does I feel I’m doing justice to the poem and delivering something which an attentive audience deserves.

Paul Farley and me.

Paul Farley’s new collection ‘The dark film’ has arrived.  I hope I will be able to thank Mr Farley personally one day for getting me seriously into poetry. Despite a lifelong love of books and song lyrics, I read little poetry until 2002, and most of that had been written years before. Somehow I managed to miss whole generations of British poets. I’ve been trying to catch up( and keep up!) ever since.  What happened in 2002? I bought ‘ The Ice Age’ by Paul Farley and was immediately hooked.

Farley’s subject matter is so very British,  so recognisable to someone of my generation (he is a year older than me). His work is formally skillful and thoughtful. It is neither boring nor showy, neither difficult nor lightweight,but engages and surprises. His subject is often history, personal history, (my history) and our collective urban enviromental  history (see ‘Civic’  ‘Brutalist’ and  ‘Automatic Doors’ from ‘Tramp in Flames’). He uses details that I recognise. 

I’ve posted  ’The Power’ from Farley’s new collection  on my Favourite poems page.  This poem ends by stepping outside of  carefully constructed frame; by this I mean the poem reaches out and makes the reader complicit, aware of him/herself as a reader. Farley does something similar in ‘Dead Fish’  from ‘The Ice Age’ which you can also find on the Favourites page.

‘The Power’  is not only a portrait of our fabulously decayed British seaside but, in typically philosophical twist, looks at itself and takes the reader ‘behind the scenes’, ending with  a brilliantly egalitarian  power-sharing gesture.
This poem is a celebration of poetry that had me grinning.

       

 

A day off

I had a day off from work today, and after the mercifully short school run,
found myself writing quite a long poem about a swan. The morning vanished as the swan sailed and the poem drafted and redrafted itself. Beginning to feel a little  unhealthy after sitting focused at a desk, I had an idea; go to a local reservoir and compare my images of Cobs, Pens and Cygnets to the real thing.  I met some weather while I was out, but got to crouch at the water’s edge observing these amazing birds as they grazed on tuffs of grass. Happy with the way the new poem was progressing
I jotted down some very short drafts. Often, if I’m ‘in the zone’, poems will come in twos and threes. Here are two of these drafts.

Early

From this track through woods
it looks as if there’s nothing here
but woods. But look, a crow drifts
its ash-span between bare trees
and on a single flower, a bee.

Above the Reservoir

Removed from my possible offices, 
a dropout for the day, I’m here again, 
feeling that mix of freedom and loneliness.

The earth is soft from a week of rain, 
sun breaking a cloud edge, its light
racing past my feet along  an iron rivulet
to a soaked  manure heap,
steaming, spliced  with straw.

I turn to the opposite hill;
a spire, out-reaching trees
the dead crowding down the bank,
flowers on their markers, bright
against the green.

Impatient for Playtime

As I’ve mentioned before, it can be a long time before your poems come home from their travels to the poem-piled desks or heaving inboxes of magazine editors.

Occasionally I write something I think is fairly complete and have an overwhelming urge to show it to the world (that’s you, dear reader). So I post my new poem here. If, later I send a version of the poem off, I will remove it so it’s not been ‘published’ as such.  The poem below has been sitting at a desk this morning and can’t wait to go outside.

Playtime

It was always my arm
that was wounded, staggering back
from the playtime wars to you,
my nurse, your big-toothed smile,
your sweet-breath on my cheek
as you made a sling from a jumper.

Clearly we knew our roles;
your ministering angel
to my fearless soldier;
shocking then, that striptease
before a crowd of boys, our teacher
arriving to drag you away,

how from then on
you didn’t meet my eye
and only played with girls.

Writing Reviews and the music of Pete Aves

I’ve reviewed two Happenstance pamphlets on Sphinx. These are my first proper attempts to fully review anything, and they were quite tough to write as I stuck religiously to the 300 word limit. Still, I am pleased to be contributing to Sphinx provides a great service to poetry pamphlets and whose many contributors bring to bear their skills and critical opinions. All this is overseen by Helena Nelson, who sets out a few simple rules to ensure that criticism is constructive and fair.

Happenstance pamphlets are beautiful, and  I particularly liked ‘The Last Walking Stick Factory’ by David Hale, which I would recommend to anyone.

I suppose I have written reviews before; my school friend Pete Aves is a fantastic musician and songwriter (there’s a link on the roll right), and I used to write publicity pieces for his albums. Pete hasn’t released anything lately, as he’s been busy with twins and house renovation and novel-writing, but he has written some brilliant lyrics and set them to some of the most beautiful music, always unpredictable, often experimental.

He also has some great stories from his years in studios and on the road with bands; Pete once offered Brian Wilson a pint backstage in London. Brian, who had been off the sauce and other substances for some time, was seriously considering the offer with a dreamy look in his eye when Pete realised his mistake.

Another anecdote involves a chat with Paul McCartney in which Macca described his old mate John as a ‘pipe and slippers man’. This line made it onto a track on Pete’s last album, ‘You, Me, and Bill Withers’, an album which also features Sarah Freestone, who as well as being a composer and conductor, is a violinist and guitarist with The BBC Concert Orchestra.

Writing; some questions and some answers

The Arvon foundation has just posted a call for contributions from writers on how the writing process works.  These contributions may end up in a book called ‘Gists’ , along with pieces by famous writers.
I came across a set of questions here, and felt compelled to answer the lot  in about five minuets. My motivation was not to get into the publication, although of course this would be nice. I really am interested in these kind of questions, and when I looked back on what I had written, (typos, spelling mistakes and all)  it was almost as if this outpouring had been written by someone else. I’ve found this exercise insightful, and have reprinted the questions and my answers below with typos and spellings corrected. It isn’t a polished peice of writing, but in a way it is more honest for not being considered at lenghth. I  recommend visiting the link above and answering the questions honestly and at speed; it might lead to publication, or maybe better still, be revealing .   

How does a book or piece of writing begin to take shape in your imagination? Do you feel your writing is a process of inventing or discovering?

I write poetry, and my poems may be generated by memories or might triggered by something I read or hear on a radio programme. The material might be outside of my experience, for example, a programme about ballooning in the Ukraine in the 1970′s. I will sit with my pen and somehow enter the space in time until the experience feels personal. In this way a poem will hopefully be ‘true’ even if it is a product of someone elses experience melded with my own imaginative exploration. I belive this to be a process of both invention and discovery. Often, what I feel to be my best work will arrive unbidden, and I will not know the destination of the poem until it is written.

What things trigger your imaginative process (for example, significant personal experiences, particular people, places, objects, dream imagery, myths, history, etc)?

Much of my writing has been about childhood, my own and my son’s.
Having relatives in Italy and traveling there as a child has provided me with a rich seam. My childhood visits appear in Kodachrome colours which I try to translate into words. The characters seemed larger and more vivid than my english family. Also, being born in the 1960′s, I am fascinated with the era and have written several poems which include characters from the time including Richard Burton and Jimi Hendrix.

How do you work – do you plan carefully or explore in the dark, trusting the process?

Some poems are planned in the sense that I will have an idea and work towards getting it on paper. At other times poems will arrive at speed and I will grab a pen and get caught in the flow of words.

Do you feel in control of your writing or are you responsive to the requirements of the work as it unfolds?

When a piece of writing is going well there is a point at which my sense of being in control and my need to respond to the requirements of the unfolding work are in perfect balance. An analogy might be a motorcyclistr who has found a rhythm as he rides a perfectly set-up machine on a challenging track. This state of mind is wonderful and unforgettable. It produces a feeling of excitement and calm, a sort of perfect cocktail.

 Do you write a first draft quickly and then revise it, or build carefully from the start?

Generally I will write a first draft quickly. This enables me to capture any ideas or words. I may re-draft and be satisfied with the result or still be re-drafting years later.

 How do you deal with blocks in the writing process?

I don’t use the term ‘block’. I regard periods of non-writing as natural and necessary. I don’t panic if I’m not writing, preferring instead to trust that poems will come when they and I are both ready.

 Do you write in service of any particular values?

I think all writers are unable to keep underlying values out of their work. One of the values explored in my case is the importance of family connection and continuity between generations, for better or worse.

 What have you learned from the practice of your craft?

That an apprenticeship that must be served.
That to be a writer one must write.
That talent alone will not suffice.
That the judgement of others should be considered,
but that one must write for oneself.

 What is the relationship between the writer’s imagination and that of the reader?

Readers will bring and invest their own experience and vice versa. For example, a reader told me how a poem of mine took her to a particular time and place in her own life. I had created the poem purely from imagination, yet the reader actually had the experience and could remember what I had written about. This is why I write; There is no boundary, no limit between the imaginations of writer and reader and no telling the outcome of their meeting.

 Do writers have any moral responsibility in their work, wider than fidelity to their personal vision?

I do feel some moral responsibility to address political issues, however obliquely. I have once or twice consciously addressed ’moral’ issues, for example the sending of National Service personnel to war in the 1950′s, which I regard as shocking abuse of the power of the state. I sometimes feel obliged to write on an issue, and although it may be true that ‘poetry changes nothing’ , at least the poet might make a reader reflect once more on a subject which should not be ignored. This is why Wilfred Owen’s work is relevent almost a century after it was written.

______________________________________________________________________