I’ve written here before about the joys and challenges of translating poetry, and I’ve recently been having another attempt at a few pieces by Eugenio Montale.
I’m very pleased that one of my translations will be published in the spring edition of the excellent New Walk magazine, and others will appear in the on-line publication The High Window at some point, the editors having a strong interest in translation and in Montale in particular.
I am a novice at translation, and even Montale’s short poems are extremely rich in reference and offer several possible interpretations of the Italian. They present fascinating challenges, offering many possible directions. After working on some of his concise pieces
I’ve been looking at a slightly longer and more complex poems.
La primavera hitleriana (The Hitler Spring) was written, or at least begun in 1938 , but not published until 1946. It is a very powerful and overtly political piece which references Dante Alighieri and Clizia, a character who appears in the fourth book of Ovid’s “Metamorphoses”, a young nymph hopelessly in love with the god Apollo, who turns into a sunflower.
But I’m getting ahead of myself. The poem begins with a ‘thick white cloud of mad moths’ – or ‘crazy moths’ – you can read a translation by Jonathan Galassi here – a different version to that published in his 2012 Collected- and you can find the original Italian here) that appeared over Florence on May 9th, 1938, the day of a meeting between Adolf Hitler and Benito Mussolini.
The first two stanzas, although layered with many potential interpretations, are relatively straightforward to decipher, but in the third stanza the poem becomes even more intricate and layered as it incorporates references to the Old Testament as well as the aforementioned Greek myth.
I’ve decided to leave my translation for the moment and show you how far I’ve got. I need a lot more time in order to research the language and references further, but I was relatively pleased with my efforts thus far and as ever, am fascinated by aspects of translation such as word choice and interpretation.